BB Guns....... Publish #3

   This dared happen four months ago. During vacations, my brother used to invite all of his friends to stay and play at the house. That is a terrible mistake my step-dad and my mom did. Letting my brother and me alone at the house for a month. My dad and my mom moved to Illinois a month before because my dad had a business there. While my brother and I were at memphis alone. One of them brought a BB gun. We went out and do a lot of crazy things. When there was nothing to do we went back to the house at 3 a.m.
   Jose, the boy who brought the BB gun, started to play with the BB. He told me to shoot the BB gun. I didn't want to. Until he convice me to do it. When I pull the trigger I heard some one from the back scream NOOOOOOOOOO! When I opened my eyes I saw the metal ball going straigh to the neighbor's car. When the ball broke the window everbody ran inside the house. I was scare to dead. And after two minutes everyoen started to laught. I was hopping that the neightbors weren't there. When I stop feeling scare I told my friend that it was better if we sleep at his house just for today. A month latter my brother and I moved to Illinois and I never heard nothing about the broken window.

Death is inevitable.. publish #7

   I Google how many people die in a daily average and it says that over 150,000 people die every day. On average, 1.8 die every second. That made me think and that  no one stops for a second and thinks about it. Death  is inevitable and no one is immortal. I have heard of people dieing but not of does death affect me. I'm not saying that I don't care what happen to them. I just don't think about it. Everyone is going to die and that is how life is, you are born, you live it and at the end you die. The only death I think about until today is my dad's. I still remember that day and the day at  the funeral.
   I heard everyone cried and scream but some people said that it was me who was screaming and crying. After that day I started to think if every life ends like that. If my is going to end like that. Laying down in a coffin, and everybody   looking at me saying, " He is in a better place." I'm not sure where I'm going or how my life is going to end. I just hope that I make the best out of it. What I know that my death is going to be one of many thousands.      

publsh # 8

     Parents can affect their child, their future, and who they  will become. If they hit them  everytime they do something wrong their child will be bad. But what is importat is how the child thinks and see it. I use to be bad and sometimes good. Everytime my brother and I fight for real my mother will always come and tell us to stop. One day I got really mad and when my mother came again i scream at her and she slap me. My brother will always run away so my mom wouldn't slap him too. After three time she slap me because I was bad ( three different days each one ) I stoped screaming at her but what I never stoped doing is fight with my brother.
    After so many years I finally control my anger. I think what my mother did to me and what I have when trought  it helped me to be the way i'm right now. I'm not saying i'm an angel but I'm better than what I use to be. When I have my own childrens I i'm going to talk with them about wha they did. I don't think is easy but its worth trying. But i'm not thinking about childrens right now. I want to have a job, my own house, and find the perfect woman. I know that the perfect woman doesn't exist. She will be perfect because I love her.
     

relationship.... publish # 4

   Everyone have a crush that sometimes doesn't last much specially when is the first one. Sometimes is not the first one but this one is different from all of the other ones. Is a crush when you like someone because she is pretty or do you really love her? Is hard to know which one is it. I had a crush too but it was difficult like everything else.I wanted to knew her better. When I thought I knew her I asked her out but I was wrong. We last for a long time but at the end we broke up. I'm not going to say it was her fault or my. Some one told me that what matter how you start what matters is how you end.
       At the end I realized  that I only liked her because she was pretty and that I will never finish to know her. After that she went out  with my friend. I would get mad at her but there is nothing between us so I said anything to her about it. But after we broke up and before she went out with him I stayed at school until eight p.m doing a project with her friend,than after that we went to the movies ( my ex didn't knew that ). I didn't want to go to school the next day because I felt sick but i took some medicine. When I got to school I saw my ex looking at me like I have done something wrong. I asked my friend to tell me what was wrong with her. He told me that she was mad at me because I stayed at school with her frind and because we went to the movies. Than some one else told me that her friend told my ex that I hold her hand ( that is true but why she cares anyway). I just didn't care, and the good news was that it was almost summer and I was going to move to  Carbondale Illinois. And now I'm here doing a project about a book about this book that did a lot of things that he might not be proud about it.

temper... publish # 1

When I was seven years old I use to get mad at verything. I used to hit my brother and at the end we end up playing video games. I remember that one time we were playing fighting but something happen and we started to fight for reall, but you know how you fight when your little just  pushing one another. But this fight was different. I only thought about hitting my brother in the face and I thought about the consequences but I didn't care about them. I put my hand up and turn my hand into a fist and when I move it toward his face I felt a sensation all over my body. I got stuck in that feeling that I open my hand but it was too late.
     When I opened my hand I hit him in the nose and his nose started to bleed. I start to cry because I was scare of what I did and what will my mom would do to me. I mother case from out side the house and saw my brother bleeding. She got some paper and give it to my brother. When she finished with my brother she turn to me and ask me what had happen and i told her " I hit him." But when  I tolod her that I closed my eyes. After I told her that I opened my eyes and saw her hand coming toward my cheek and slap me. I got more mad that I scream at her and she slap me again.

2nd quarter blog: reflection and preview

        This is the first blog of the second quarter. I need to find some things I did wrong and what i did right. The first mistake I found is that I forgot to place some words. I needed more information within the paragraph. What I did right are the pictures and the comments I leave to other people. But after all I'm satisfy with my grade, and I think is an B if right.

        Some goals I have for this 2nd quarter are to have a better grade than the 1st quarter. My second goal is not to make the same errors I did in the 1st  quarter. I think I'm going to do better this time because I know what I did wrong last time. I like to blog because I can express what I like, I don't like, and how I feel about this project. When we first blog I thought that it was going to be hard and I didn't want to blog but later on I realize that it was easy and better than write in a piece of paper. Now I have to read and blog about this book  call king of the mild frontier. I think this is this a really good book.

animoto link

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the five elements of literature

Setting:  Is where the story take place.

              The setting takes place at a park where Quentin and Margo found a dead body.
              Margo and Q were walking down the when Margo told Q " Is that a dead man?" Q, trying not enter in panic, told Margo " He is just resting."

Rising action: a related series of incidents in a literary plot that build toward the point of greatest interest.

          Margo and Quentin escape at night and take revenge to all of their enemies. Margo crack open Q's window and asked him "I need you to help me to take revenge to who deserve it and I need your van." Q accept and sided to go with her.

Climax: the highest or most intense point in the development of a story.

          Margo disappears after passing an entire night with Quentin breaking the rules.

After breaking in into houses Q went to  school next day thinking if Margo will start to talk to him more and if they will go out, but she didn't went to the school. Q went back to his house and when he opened the door Margo's mom asked him " When was the last time you saw Margo?" Q thinking if he should say the truth or not asked "Why?" Margo's mom told him " Because she is missing"   

Falling action: the part of a literary plot that occurs after the climax has beenreached and the conflict has been resolve.
          Quentin found all the clues and he has figure out that Margo is at a town named Agloe that doesn't exist.

Q drove for 9 or 10 hours to Agloe, a paper town in NY, found where he tough Margo was hiding. His friend asked him "Do you think she is still there after 3 weeks?" Q said "She is"






Resolution: Is the part of the story's plot line in which the problem of the story is resolve or work out.
               Quentin find Margo living in a abandon farm by New York, but Margon is not going back. Margo asked "Do you want to come with to travel all over the country?" but Q said " I would love to but I have to go back with my parents and i'm going to college i'm sorry." than they kiss and each other went their a different way.   

BLOG ENTRY # 4

                                                             ROBBY'S  BLOG 

Robby you miss spell "he" you put "the" in your seventh sentence. Your book SUCKS!!!! jk. Well I wouldn't read it because I like mystery books. Maybe this book is a mystery book but you don't have more details about it. When you add more details tell me. I don't believe you read 20 pages. I think you just read the summery of the book.


                                                             CHRIST'S BLOG


You did a great job describing your book Chris. I like your book. I mite read it later on.Your summery of the book is great. I saw your other posts and I think you did a great job in all of them. I think you going to get a good great if you finish with the ones you need to finish. Keep up the good job.




                                                            MARCUS'S BLOG 


I like your post Marcus. Your description of the book is not so bad. I like that you stick to it even though it started slow. I think there would be a lot of suspension and action in this book. I can't wait for you to make the other posts about your book. You going to have a perfect score in this book and in this blog project. Your summery is great.

MUSIC FOR MY BOOK

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           After  searching for a long time I found the song that goes with my book.I really like this song because it sounds like suspension. Well for me it does sound like a  suspension song because it goes fast and loud. I said is a suspension book because Q ( that's the nick name of the main character ) looks for a girl that has vanish. But before they stop talking for a long time they found a dead body while they were walking by the park. Both of them wanted to know why that mysterious person die. They went to his apartment and search for clues but they didn't found anything.
          After that the years pass and they never speak a word of what happen that day. He loved her more than anything in the world but the bad thing is that she didn't talk with him anymore.He was  obsess with her that he didn't thought of something else that it wasn't her. He thought that he knew her well but later on he will realize that  the girl he thought he knew is a totally different person. After she disappear he started to look for her and found some clues that will tell him where his secret love is hiding. When he found her living in a paper town call Agloe in NY. What he didn't knew it was that she wasn't going to go back with him.
           

             

my favorite book                                       Aglo is in NY know as Paper Town







Subdivision in Orlando Florida  where Quentin and Margo lived.


                          

Barn where Margo stayed after her scape.                 John green the author of Paper Town.



                      

Grovepoint is where Quentin went to search for Margo.          Radar's ( Quentin's friend ) parents own the                                                                                                                         
                                                                                              larges collection of black santas


                       
John Green made a video talking about his book.    This is another cover.





Margo said in the book  " A paper town for a paper girl "

paper town

My name is Yair Cordoba my middle name is Alberto but I don't use it. I'm a freshman in Mrs.Hayes class. The book I'm reading is Paper Town. Is about a boy name Quenting that has spent a lifetime loving Margo Roth from far. After 8 or 7 year later she cracks open a window and climbs into his life, dressed like a ninja and tell him to help her to take revenge in the middle of the night. After the night ends Quenting goes back to school only to find out that Margo has disappear.But soon he founds out that she leaved clues and that they are for him.